
“I need you to gather the able-bodied.”
Thomas and Sophia reprised the Inostranka Conference, as they had in Episode 1.03 and in Episode 1.02 before that. The Avias passengers suffered nosebleeds, as they had in Episode 1.04. Michael Buchanan demanded to know what was going on, as he had the episode before. Thomas, as usual, was on his mobile phone. He was disobeying Sophia, as usual.
There’s nothing new under the sun, and there was very little new on Inostranka. Sean and Leila reunited after an unlikely decision by Vicky, Blake Sterling presented his final solution to the Inostranka problem, President Martinez showed a dark side to his character, and Sophia revealed a humane outlook.
Last night’s episode was weak. Perhaps some episodes must serve to “put the pieces in place”. This is a nearly axiomatic truth in serial fiction, but even so, we cannot be faulted for some expectation of novel technique, nor can we be faulted for feeling some disappointment in worn and frayed execution.
There were bright spots, and I will delve into them. But tonight, while I was trying to watch, carpenters were busy at work behind me, sawing boards to two-metre lengths. “One hundred and seven, all the same height, enough for the detainees and the main characters. Pine boards, simple box, medium finish. Oughta have ‘em done in four weeks.” I’m hoping NBC will send the carpenters home.
The Final Solution

Carbon monoxide gas.
I thought this scene was done well. Zyklon B would have been over the top. As it was, my first reaction to Blake Sterling’s mention of carbon monoxide was to recall the Nazi genocide. I have to believe most viewers had the same reaction, but I consider that the scene was handled appropriately. The President was contemplating something barbaric, but his consideration of the option was in response to a barbaric threat. He was not planning genocide, but something more akin to a cold war stalemate.
Nevertheless, the scene was chilling. We knew that the President of the United States was willing to entertain the idea of a ruthless, inhumane response to terrorist acts. The question THE EVENT put before us is as old as war, and the response is always informed by the events of the day. I believe the question was best posed by George Orwell sixty years ago. In the exchange below, O’Brien is exploring Winston’s willingness to commit acts in support of a rebellion against the oppressive regime of Big Brother.
“You are prepared to commit murder?”
“Yes.”
“To commit acts of sabotage which may cause the death of hundreds of innocent people?”
“Yes.”
“If, for example, it would somehow serve our interests to throw sulfuric acid in a child’s face—are you prepared to do that?”
“Yes.”
The obvious question framed by the exchange: How would such a rebellion differ from the totalitarian hell imposed by Big Brother? If President Martinez were willing to commit unholy acts against people not proven to have perpetrated any crime, how could he maintain any pretense of civility?
In a generally bland episode, I found this scene thought provoking and well done.
Sulfuric Acid in a Child’s Face

Good fiction is fearless. George Orwell’s 1984 is on the top shelf of my office library, and Michael Radford’s brilliant screen adaptation of the classic science fiction novel is a cinematic masterpiece and the best motion picture I have ever experienced.
“Sometimes,” Darren Franich wrote in his review a few hours ago, “you have to shoot the baby.” Good fiction is bold. Not shooting the baby is weak. If a choice is made to save the baby, some other unthinkable act must trump the horror. Two pleading women in front of him, each claiming ownership, a Solomon-like figure holds a sword in one hand and dangles a baby by a single leg in the other. When he offers the only fair resolution to the dispute and the woman on the left cries out, “No! Don’t cut him in half! Let him live! Give him to her!” he complies, giving the baby to the woman who would have allowed the infant to die. The baby is in the hands of an evil woman, and the tension is escalated, not reduced.
Good fiction sustains tension. The original Solomon scene in the Tanakh (1 Kings 3:16-28) depicted the wise king giving the baby to the woman who pled for the infant’s life. The scene worked as story because it was part of a larger, tension-filled saga of the founding of a new monarchy. At the same time it served the even larger interest of the Tanakh in providing a template for human social life.
A recent twist on the Solomon story was depicted on a dark night in a young French woman’s tent. The “wise king”, Charles Widmore, had ordered the execution of a woman and her baby, and he dispatched young Benjamin Linus to commit the unthinkable deed. The baby he saved, of course, was Alexandra Rousseau, and he raised her as his own. The reason the scene worked is that he did not kill the mother. Ben escalated tension by allowing Danielle Rousseau to live the remainder of her life in a mother’s worst hell, not knowing whether her baby was alive or dead, suffering or flourishing, abused or loved. Worse, the baby was taken into the care of a man we already knew to have committed acts one character described as “nothing less than genocide”. A third tension-advancing element was provided in the fact that Ben was disobeying his superior officer. And the entire scene fed into the greater tension-filled question of Danielle’s and Claire’s relationship to the supreme villain of the show, the Man in Black. As a segment of serial fictional, the scene was powerful in at least four distinct dimensions.
Adam’s reprieve from Vicky’s bullet did not sustain tension. We already knew the youngster was alive and well and living with Vicky’s mother. Saving the baby was the lesser of two evils after Vicky and her accomplices massacred the remainder of the family, and therefore further reduced tension. Brief tension was realised in Vicky’s disobedience, but this was attenuated by hiding the baby and fabricating a simple deception. The tension in Ben’s similar act, on the other hand, was magnified by his bold confrontation with the Leader, demonstrating a fearless disobedience that could have gotten him immediately killed. In comparison, little was on the line for Vicky.
An Orderly Rescue

Vicky’s crime scene conversion at the police station made no sense to me. If she was psychotic, we had no earlier indication of any such malady. If mowing down all of her accomplices was meant to demonstrate a mother’s love or evince some advanced form of humanity, I didn’t get the point. A more likely response: Vicky gathers everyone on the roof of the precinct station, they all load the highest-calibre weapons available (surely a police station—in George Bush’s Texas—is going to have higher octane than a few .45-calibre side arms) and turn Sean’s black SUV into metallic Swiss cheese.
Vicky knew Sean had little help, if any, beyond Agent Collier. Therefore killing him would not have constituted a high-probability risk to Adam. Is killing a room full of co-workers easier on the conscience than killing two enemies in the SUV outside?
I may be missing a few plot points here. It remains possible, as I conjectured last week, that Vicky does not seek Sean’s death. This possibility was reduced last night with Carter’s pronouncement that he could kill both Sean and the FBI agent from his rooftop perch. Frankly, the finer plot points seemed to have gone missing in this episode, and I didn’t find Vicky’s strange assassination of her former co-workers to advance the story or advance tension in any useful or meaningful way.
The entire episode consisted of two main plot points: Leila’s rescue and Thomas’ demand. Leila’s rescue, except for the zero-tension move by Vicky, was by the book, and could have served as half of a 43-minute episode of Law and Order. Or maybe the re-vamped but still formulaic Hawaii Five-O. The comparison is not entirely fair, I suppose. Agent Collier didn’t say, “Book ‘im, Sean-oh,” when they caught Carter.
Holding On By a Single Thread

I liked the image of inmate Sophia looking high in the sky at the bright sun. She had never seen the sun so high above the horizon, not since she left whatever world she came from, anyway. The shot reminded me of Robert Stroud’s transfer at the end of “The Birdman of Alcatraz”. A passenger jet flies overhead, and even though Stroud was incarcerated before the invention of airplanes, he knows all about the plane. “Boing 707, weighs 247,000 pounds, carries a payload of 22,000 pounds, each engine has a thrust of 13,000 pounds, cruises at 595 miles per hour. Just because a man’s in prison doesn’t mean he’s a boob.”
Sophia’s appreciation of the Maryland sun was a sign of hope. Hers was the only plot thread advanced during this episode. Perhaps NBC will try to make something of this series. Perhaps they will hire writers and directors. They need to act quickly, though. A dozen men, shovels over their shoulders, confer near a large, open field. Not far away, several dozen orderly mounds of fresh earth are arranged in precise rows, each bearing a simple red granite marker.
One of the men leans on his shovel, points to the graves. “Them’s the Heroes markers, ain’t it?”
“Naw,” the other grave digger says. “We buried ‘em three years ‘go, remember? They jus’ ain’t figured it out ‘til now. Them there’s the FlashForward graves, what we dug four months ‘go.”
“Oh, yeah.” He shakes his head. “Hard t’ keep ‘em all straight.”
The digger chuckles. “That’s for damn sure.”
“How many this time?”
“They sayin’ 107—‘nuff for all the main actors and the ‘dee-TAIN-ees’ from ‘Laska.”
The digger shakes his head and frowns. “Damn shame.”
“Yeah.” His friend smiles. “Keepin’ us busy, tho.”
Perhaps NBC will issue those twelve men a stop-work order. Let’s hope they issue it soon. A tension-killing calm is settling on Mount Inostranka. NBC needs to create a blizzard.
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Pearson, I thought last nights episode was also a little weak, and it felt very lacking to me. Now that I have read your review, I know what it was missing. The tension! There really was very little tension, and it did not leave much for future episodes. I was surprised by the President saying he would kill the prisoners, but I was glad to see he finally grew some balls and was going to stand up to Thomas. Thomas' entire episode last night seemed a bit forced, and my thought was if he was going rogue back in the late 40's why would these "visitors" allow him to continue on for another 66 years???
ReplyDeleteI certainly hope next weeks episode is able to bring back some tension and suspicion, and thank you for your great review again!
I thought this episode was weak when I watched it, and I was DRUNK! :P
ReplyDeleteBy the way, the show got picked up for a whole 22-episode season yesterday.
Oh, man. All people do is bitch about how there is too much going on in this show, but now that they finally take a breath people are instead complaining about that.
ReplyDeleteShow is entertaining. Leave it alone.
Pearson I guess you found this episode so boring and lame that you forgot to comment on everything of value it it. Im fine if you dont like an episode, you can hate it for all I care. I didn't think this episode was all that great, but I'm very disappointed that you let your frustration seemingly distract you from what was interesting in this episode. We learned a lot about Thomas, the circumstances of the non-terrestrials presence on earth in 1945, and that they may be behind many of our technological advances for the past 66 years. This kind of revisionist history and character motivation insight is the kind of stuff I expected would have stimulated a much larger response from you. How do you not even mention the Manhattan Project connection or the fact that according to Simon and Thomas's conversation "they're all gonna die anyway?" Even if for some reason you indeed do not find any of these elements at all worth your analysis, i find it quite odd that you don't even mention them in this brief and dismissive write up. Also you can stop with the grave digging joke cause the show got a full season order despite its ratings not being all that great. Chances are NBC has every intention letting the show run a full first season, to cancel it after giving the full order will cost them too greatly. Maybe the show will decline and not continue beyond this year, but I really think the show has some legs.
ReplyDeletei dont think it's great. but the episode's not that bad.
ReplyDeletein terms of revelation, it did tell us what the non-terrestrials were doing for the past 66 years. it tells us what kind of president elias is, and that some people perceive him as indecisive. it tells us that on some level, sophia can be trusted when she say that this isn't how it's supposed to happen. it also tells us that thomas isn't as bad ass as he projects himself, that he bluffs and has no balls to see things through.
it also tells us that the president wife is elias' moral compass.
it's also cool that they didn't ask us to wait for an entire season for leila and sean to finally reunite. it presents us with an interesting cliffhanger with DB Sweeney at the hands of that FBI agent (who I still think isn't gonna survive pretty soon)
what irked me though is how quick vicky changed sides just because of the kid. the flashback shows us that she isnt all that capable of killing innocent beings. but it didn't give us any concrete proof that she really cares for the baby she raised as her own just enough for her to put her life and career on the line. it wouldve been a lot believable if the flashbacks did show that she did raise the baby and that she had a relationship with him. i was rewatching the scene where sean is threatening vicky. i didnt get the sense that vicky was afraid for her mother's safety. the focus was on kid's picture, telling us that whatever's gonna motivate vicky to disobey orders it would have something to do with the kid. but it was kinda lame, coz we never really get enough info about that relationship. in the end, the story asked us fill in the blanks and assume that they do. if so, that's lame writing.
but all in all, i dont hate the episode. it's normal for a show to have relatively weaker episodes. but you dont really look at a show in terms of its individual episodes. it's how they tell an entire season's worth of story
Sorry there sour grapes but if you read the entire review you will see that Pearson not only showed the good and the bad... but really did quite an excellent job at it.
ReplyDeleteI agree with you P: Inastranka Gas Chambers and the Maryland Sun were both excellent scenes.
There's at least half an episode every week worth watching. That's for sure.
Hi Pearson,
ReplyDeleteThough I understand your criticism of last night's episode, my husband and I enjoyed it for the most part. I admit we are pretty easy to please, though. I think perhaps they were trying to show Vicky in a little more sympathetic light by having her save the baby. Before that she was just about pure evil. I agree that it seemed strange that she turned on her comrades, though. We'll have to see what ramifications this betrayal has for her, if any, in future episodes.
I was wondering why the President was threatening to kill all the detainees at one time. If he had carried out the threat it would have destroyed any leverage he had with Thomas, who said he was capable of laying waste to whole cities. So, frankly, I thought that threat was pretty foolish. Strategically it would have been better to threaten to murder a few detainees at a time. Thomas might have been ok with that, though, and the President might have actually had to get his hands dirty, which I'm not sure the writers are willing to have him do. We'll have to see.
After this episode I am questioning Thomas' and Sophia's relationship. I had thought they might be husband and wife or lovers (maybe they are, and I forget), but now they seem more like comrades. To me, Thomas showed himself to be pretty ruthless very early on, as he showed no concern about what the humans might do with the atomic bomb. It looks like the series could be shaping up to be, in part, a struggle between his "end justifies the means" approach to the detainees' problems and Sophia's more humane approach.
I have a feeling this series is going to shape up to be more of a traditional action thriller kind of show like 24 than a real challenging and thoughtful series like Lost, but we'll see. There's room for both. Frankly, from what I've seen of Fringe, I think it has more in common with Lost than this one does, at least so far.
Hi Jaja,
ReplyDeleteThank you for these excellent and balanced comments. You bring up several of the noteworthy and positive aspects of the episode (which I excluded from my review), and you also detail the single aspect of the episode that I found weakest: Vicky's decision to turn on her colleagues.
If you are interested in the rationale for my selection of topics for the review, I recommend you read my response to Grapes9h5, above.
I didn't hate the episode, either. And with you, I remain optimistic that future episodes will show improvement. I can honestly say I look forward to next week!
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Hi Grapes9h5,
ReplyDeleteThank you for this detailed and useful contribution to our discussion. Your points are well taken. I certainly had the option of going into some of the plot points you mention, and the interests of readers may have been better served by doing precisely as you indicate. The plot was advanced on multiple fronts, character building occurred, particularly in the case of President Martinez and Simon Lee, and several scenes were done well. As I normally do in an essay, I made a decision to exclude certain events. I've never offered an episode recap, and I have rarely made a decision to analyse every major event in an episode. I am generally selective, and in this review, I made a conscious decision to emphasise negative aspects of the episode. In an important sense this emphasis is not fair and therefore not true, in that the emphasis is partial and disregards positive attributes. However, in another sense it is true, in that I honestly perceived the weak points as I discussed. In the greater scheme of the review's purpose, I felt comfortable providing the review as written. I understand reviews to be the starting point for discussion, and therefore I especially value contributions such as yours, which take issue with the points I make. The discussion I hope to engender is one which might find its way into members of cast and crew. I know one of the lead actors has read my essays, and may still be reading them. The Event has lost several major reviewers. They've thrown in the towel. I was a highly-cited Lost essayist. The influence I can bring to bear is very slight indeed, but if a few negative words can spur improvement, I ought to do what I can.
I hope the series succeeds. We had good indication of such a possibility a few days ago when NBC approved a full season for The Event. Here's hoping they have every success.
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Hi Patrick,
ReplyDeleteThank you for your comments. I decided this week to write the only negative review I have ever given. The decision was not easy, and I certainly appreciate your position. Every series has "filler" episodes and has to take time to put things in place for future plot developments. I am certainly with you in hoping that the show was just "taking a breath" and that the following episodes will be as rich as earlier ones. Thanks so much for your contribution to the dialogue.
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Hi Joseph,
ReplyDeleteThanks for your comments. I was glad to see NBC had called for a complete season. This will give everyone a chance to make the new series work. I hope it succeeds!
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Hi Golfluvr13,
ReplyDeleteThank you for your comments. I've never written a negative review, but honesty is always good if not always valued, and I felt comfortable emphasising those aspects of the episode I felt were amenable to improvement. The show is new enough that bold steps might be taken now to improve it, and this is my hope. We shall see! Thanks again for contributing to the discussion.
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This show is no LOST there will never be another LOST period
ReplyDeleteHi Diane,
ReplyDeleteThank you for this excellent contribution to the discussion.
I made a decision to focus almost exclusively on the negative aspects of this week's episode. Several commentators have pointed out the plot- and character-advancing facets of the episode, and I could have included these in my review, or indeed I could even have focussed on them exclusively. I felt I had to highlight what I considered to be a bad choice in relying on a poorly-supported character weakness (Vicky's fondness for babies or her maternal instincts) to determine the course of a major sub-plot (Leila's rescue). I felt the execution of this resolution of Leila's abduction destroyed Vicky's credibility and severely harmed the sub-plot. It was convenient, from the point of view of a writer, to have Vicky solve all of the problems surrounding Leila's imprisonment with a few bullets from her gun. But convenience is another way of saying laziness, and in this case the dramatic elements were really abused, and the story suffered.
Writing drama is the most terrifying challenge there is. I've written two novels, both submitted for critiques from several dozen individuals. In all, some 120 people gave me over 800 critiques on the two stories. The most frequent words of advice: Create credible conflict. Conflict is the soul of drama. Without conflict, there is no drama. If the conflict is not believable, the entire story suffers. Good writing works within character constraints. If you're writing a semi-fictionalised Ronald Reagan, you just can't have him in league with true-believer Communists, even if it allows you to advance the plot more quickly. You have to advance the plot in spite of Reagan's hatred of Communism. If you don't you are being convenient, lazy--you are essentially, cheating, and your readers (in the case of television, viewers) will know it. This week the writers and director cheated, and I called them on it.
Thanks again for your excellent comments!
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Hi JohnLocked,
ReplyDeleteThank you for your comments.
No, there will never be another Lost. Having said that, I have to confess I was hesitant to bring up the issue of Ben's abduction of Alex. While it was an excellent example contrasting the poor execution of Vicky's very similar abduction of baby Adam, nevertheless the comparison invites a more general comparison between The Event and Lost, which I don't think is fair to The Event, since it is clearly following its own storytelling paradigm and has a very different mythology and plot. In the end, I decided to use the comparison. I felt pointing out the differences between excellent drama and poorly constructed drama was useful, and since this was my objective in writing the review, I took the chance and used it. The Event is not Lost, but in its own way, it has the potential to be just as entertaining, compelling, and thought provoking as Lost ever was.
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